Well, here's the next part of chapter 1, enjoy!
The rainy seasons in
Auria were much longer than in Lian or Starian, but the dry season was equally
matched something that Raintal lacked.
Nala was standing on a terrace wrapped
in a shawl. The clouds were far off, but moving quickly. She stood listening to
the thunder that seemed to issue from the earth it was shaking. The night of
the coronation had been stormy and relentless.
The guests from other countries
were staying at Yarren till the weather improved. Although it stopped raining
for intervals, the rainy season would not lighten until the third month.
Nala
had found the more time she spent around the nobles the less she liked them. They
were all haughty and conceited; she wondered if any of them knew where she had
really come from.
Princess Robina had confessed later that she had made up the
story and that she truly knew nothing of Nala's past. Nala kept her distance
from all if she could, hoping that she would never become like them.
She rubbed
her arms and felt goose pimples; she had almost decided to go back in when
someone said, "there you are".
She recognized Robina's voice. She
felt an urge to send her away; she didn't feel like having company. She decided
to just ignore her. Robina came and stood next to her. She looked at Nala, then
out at the spectacular view of the wet sands and the rainforests not far beyond
the palace grounds.
"I've always wondered why my father built our palace
in the middle of the desert." She said "and as much as I love Starian,
I wouldn't mind moving to Auria, it's a lot wetter than back home."
Nala
was confused by her words, why was she telling her this? "You don't have
to pretend with me," she said abruptly. "What?" Asked Nala,
taken aback. "You know what I mean, your fine manner and speech, I don't
care how you talk and act. Even though others might."
Nala was lost for
words; this was something she had never prepared for. From her earliest memories
of schooling, Nala had been taught to diagnose everything someone
said, and to answer in kind.
Robina sighed, "I guess you are just like the
rest of those over-dressed self-absorbed, arrogant..."
"Alright!" Said Nala annoyed by Robina's implications.
"I haven't
been trained to speak with you this way." Robina raised an eyebrow
"trained?" "Yes trained. What do you think, I stole the right to
be princess?" She said furiously "yes." Nala made an exasperated
noise "I didn't choose this!" To Nala's pleasure, Robina backed away
a little. Nala leaned forward against the balcony railing "you wouldn’t
understand, you are a princess".
Robina moved closer "try me".
Great! A pointer; Every time a character speaks you give them a paragraph. Even if they only say one word. Is Robina the character that continues to 'reappear'?
ReplyDeleteNope, but she does reappear a few times
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